Scott Sundvall wrote:
You wouldn't want me to say too much about the ending of the book because it would surely cause further antagonization and re-instigate the e-war ensuing between Homeland Security and this press.
Ah, thanks for reminding me of that little problem. I have so many problems I'm juggling, and that one just got caught in the light fixture... But yes, yes, the Police State would not take kindly to that. And I guess I've already seen that they're a wee bit stronger than I am, sigh. (BASTARDS!)
As far as enlightening or obscuring the ending, I think you managed to do both just fine. (And that takes talent!)
But actually (ssshhhhh...) that wasn't what I was talking about. Talk to me in ten years, maybe...
Oh, and I think I'm gonna change that one excerpt on the site about "the girl" to the orgy sale scene. What do you think?
Also, it's on my list of things to do to get some flash going on the site-- pop-ups of book quote to engender interest. So if you'd like to pick out maybe 6 short hooky quotes...